Friday, June 6, 2014

Review on SOI draft

After consult with Sweii on SOIT draft. She suggested that my target audience should scope into some specific group and a clear message that my narrative should brings. 

Due to the limited sources that I found in online, I will scope down my target audience in the age range of 10 an above and urban areas. Basically, my interactive narrative website is targeted on general. 

From previous, I kind of lost in the direction of what message should i convey for my target audience through my story.Touchscreen device that has both negative and positive impact. However, I have done some research to make the topic of my final project more solid. 

Some of the research shows that the negative is overweight than the positive impact. Some of the application that available to download to the touchscreen device is endanger to children. 

In this links http://www.checkupnewsroom.com/7-dangerous-apps-that-parents-need-to-know-about/  shows that the 7 dangerous application that cause harmful to the children. 

From that, it come out the inspiration of my narrative by having a contrast on a kid with technology around her/him and a kid that without technology. The main message is to show that the warm of having physical toy such as teddy bear, building blocks that could bring more happiness and memories to the kids unlike the other side, technology should be use in more responsibility way.

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