Saturday, November 15, 2014

Refined storyboard

I have combined the previous chapter 2 and chapter 4 story together so the story is shorter than the previous composed and more solid. 

I have reduced the story into 3 chapters and I took away the about page since I will be introducing Baku character in my narrative so I think the about page is not necessary. 

I will just roughly noted down the story line below each storyboard.


Baku entering Yoshi's dream:
Top left (Panel 1)

Top right (Panel 2)Bottom left (Panel 3)
Bottom right (Panel 4)

The final chapter story will start with a kid was washing dishes and look exhausted. When Baku passed by he saw this kid falling asleep and this is the chance that he start his evil entertainment.

The Kid who name Yoshi has dreamed he entered in the field and met his passed away father. Baku felt touched and he missed his master Yori too.

In Yoshi's dream:Top left (Panel 5)
Top right (Panel 6)Bottom left (Panel 7)
Bottom right (Panel 8)

Yoshi was playing kite with his father. But suddenly the weather has changed, the wind blew away the kite to the forest. Yoshi and his father couldn't get the kite but they are entering to the forest and find a shelter place to hide in.

In Yoshi's dream:
Top left (Panel 9)

Top right (Panel 10)Bottom left (Panel 11)
Bottom right (Panel 12)
Baku was always protecting the father and son. Suddenly, a hungry monster appeared.

In Yoshi's dream:
Top left (Panel 13)

Top right (Panel 14)Bottom left (Panel 15)
Bottom right (Panel 16)

In Panel 13, page will direct the user into interaction page where users have to help Baku to fight with the monster by throwing stones. Panel 14 showed after the monster gets injured. Baku was being praised by Yoshi and the father. When towards the end of the dream, Yoshi's father has to go and promised that they will meet again in the next dream.

In Yoshi's dream:
Top left (Panel 17)

Top right (Panel 18)Bottom left (Panel 19)
Bottom right (Panel 20)

Baku was excited because he saw his master Yori. Story will end with Yoshi wake up from his dream and he met Baku and they smile to each other. 

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