Tuesday, January 6, 2015

External Guest Feedbacks - Benedict Tan

Another special guest, Benedict Tan visited us on today. Today I managed to show him the first chapter and second chapter with full interaction. He was surprised on my project because he has never seen this before. He suggested the chapters of my story should have some interesting transitions to let users know they are entering into the dream. His other comment is to put more dreamy effects into the edge of the panels to represent dream. I have asked him whether the fonts are readable and should it be a problem, his comments are the font size are fine but should reduce the word length.

My execution after this is to prepare the alpha test questions and refined some of the scenes in chapter 1 and chapter 2. I found out my story lack of instruction as it is very important for user testing. I will continue figuring out the problems of displaying my project with Google Chrome browser which the big issue that currently I am worried. I will reflect on what Benedict suggestions if I have the extra time to allow me to change.

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