Thursday, January 22, 2015

Storyline correction from Kristy

I have asked one of my friends from GD class Kristy, who was very good in English to help me in correcting the storyline in my final year project. She was trying to help me to reduce the text and correct the grammar of the sentence.


Before:


After:


There are a lot of refinements , very appreciate that she is willing to help.

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