Forth Consultation

A forth consultation with Kelvin and Chuan Zui.

Showing them my refined storyline and some of the storyboard sketches.

Storyline:

1. Vance has abandoned in the forest and adopted by a wizard.

2. The relationship of the wizard and Vance are close. They are like the father and son. However, when Vance growing up, the wizard became old and weak.

3. Wizard knows the true identity of Vance once he adopted. However before wizard passed away, he told Vance his ability of able to enter other people's dream and helping people eat up their bad dream in order to survive. 

4. After Vance has lost the wizard. He become lonely and depressed. He stay at home everyday and having nightmare everynight.

5. One day he has try to use his ability. He entered in other people's dream and found out everyone is having wonderful dream that he never had one.

6. Vance felt jealous and started to destroy/sabotage people's dream from sweet dream to nightmare. He felts happy of what he was doing and wanted everyone same with him.

7.More and more he becoming a monster and forgot what his father aspiration.

8.Until one day, he met a character who having same situation as him in real life.

9.This character has nightmare.He dreamt about his father passed away and he is not afraid. (Reminds Vance memory of he with his father)

10.Although the character's father has passed away but this character has lived in a positive attitude which is part of the father's aspiration.

11. Vance felt sympathy about this character. He started to observe him and gain interest about this character.

12. Slowly, Vance has realize that he was wrong. He should listen to his father using his ability into the right way.

13. In the end, Vance has become a guardian of the people in the town that helping them to eat up their nightmare and protect the villagers.

Storyboard:

The story will start with character sabotage the people's dream.

As a feedback from the supervisor. The story is better than the previous however Zui suggested me to change the character into puppy and using some Japanese element such as the woodblock prints Ukigo to create more visual identity and attract user.

I found this is an interesting point from Chuan Zui, as I will change my graphic visual from western into Japanese elements and inside story I will introduce some of the Japanese culture. I will look further for the Japanese identity such as the textures and their culture such as bon odori and so on in the following post. I will create a final storyline and refine the storyboard and sketch out my character design as soon as possible.